From e7dbe24e1e98920cfb0dcdf23d2e64dfa5ee3709 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 27 Sep 2025 20:31:50 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 01/13] lakewater -> lake water --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md index 458e2b7..8d1b6e7 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ The girl let out a soft scream, turned on her heels, and made to flee…but inst To her credit, she tried her best. She was able to hold back her tears for a few seconds, but then it all came pouring out in a wail. -The boy went to her side, holding a handkerchief wet with lakewater, and wiped the dirt from her face and dress as much as possible. +The boy went to her side, holding a handkerchief wet with lake water, and wiped the dirt from her face and dress as much as possible. Her expression remained scrunched up and her mood dark, however, so—reluctant though he was—the boy threw himself onto the ground too and rolled around until his own suit was as stained as hers had been. This turn of events seemed to have been quite a surprise for the girl, who stared at him blankly before bursting into joyful laughter. From 143a5a85973e44060c8d613f32490030df54c1a5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 13:05:19 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 02/13] "Can" to "could" to match series title --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md index 8d1b6e7..2d2ea34 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ If he shook her hand off now, it’d be over. He would return to his regular lif “Please…” -She’d probably mustered all the little courage she had. Her breathing grew rough. “Can we meet again once more?” +She’d probably mustered all the little courage she had. Her breathing grew rough. “Could we meet again once more?” It can’t be helped. How can I refuse if she says it like that? @@ -174,4 +174,4 @@ Of course, that didn’t bother him—though the actions of her family created < That aside, those were fun and happy days. -So much that, from the bottom of his heart, he wished that those bright days could continue forever and ever. \ No newline at end of file +So much that, from the bottom of his heart, he wished that those bright days could continue forever and ever. From 91c980f60d898997076bd49c8f172c460419497b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 13:23:07 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 03/13] Fix Elpis trading federation --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md index 384b585..826f12f 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ Virtually the same day as that, Croyance, the Eleventh Beast Who Remains Rooted, These Beasts were incapable of flight. For those which could not take off from the surface, it should have been totally impossible for them to attack Regule Aire. Yet, the truth remained: those three Beasts suddenly appeared in the sky in front of unprepared people and massacred them. -The tragedy’s cause eventually came to light. The Elpis Trading Federation city-state, who existed on Island No. 13 at the time, had conducted research on Beasts and, for the purposes of political maneuvering, brought them up from the surface. +The tragedy’s cause eventually came to light. The Elpis Collective city-state, who existed on Island No. 13 at the time, had conducted research on Beasts and, for the purposes of political maneuvering, brought them up from the surface. Who on earth would try to do that? everyone thought. Rather, before that, they hadn’t even imagined that a method of technology might make it possible to capture and contain Beasts. From 3257eee2c6b70ab6345fd57049f8f5710c556517 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 13:25:06 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 04/13] Update 2.1.md --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md index 826f12f..63ae82f 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ Virtually the same day as that, Croyance, the Eleventh Beast Who Remains Rooted, These Beasts were incapable of flight. For those which could not take off from the surface, it should have been totally impossible for them to attack Regule Aire. Yet, the truth remained: those three Beasts suddenly appeared in the sky in front of unprepared people and massacred them. -The tragedy’s cause eventually came to light. The Elpis Collective city-state, who existed on Island No. 13 at the time, had conducted research on Beasts and, for the purposes of political maneuvering, brought them up from the surface. +The tragedy’s cause eventually came to light. The Elpis Collective city-state, which existed on Island No. 13 at the time, had conducted research on Beasts and, for the purposes of political maneuvering, brought them up from the surface. Who on earth would try to do that? everyone thought. Rather, before that, they hadn’t even imagined that a method of technology might make it possible to capture and contain Beasts. From 4926bd4106a0aacc09bf302c762d834d6d011388 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 13:32:14 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 05/13] Remove a paragraph break --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md | 4 +--- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md index c2a7e1a..44a7c02 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md @@ -50,9 +50,7 @@ Feodor shook his empty hands. Of course, he wasn’t holding any real dagger. He One by one, the questions rose among the people surrounding them: What happens now? Why is this giant semifer so happily declaring his defeat? Only the two involved could understand the situation. -Feodor fixed his misaligned glasses back into position. “Your assessment boosts my confidence, Portrick.” He went over to the toppled semifer, took his extended arm with his own hand, and pulled him up with all his strength. “Though, you don’t need to praise me. - -After all, I cheated rather than used my own power. It’s something that could only work against an overly strong person like you.” +Feodor fixed his misaligned glasses back into position. “Your assessment boosts my confidence, Portrick.” He went over to the toppled semifer, took his extended arm with his own hand, and pulled him up with all his strength. “Though, you don’t need to praise me. After all, I cheated rather than used my own power. It’s something that could only work against an overly strong person like you.” Imps were a deceitful race. The affinity for deceiving others was rooted within his species. It was only natural that the methods of his fighting style would reflect that wicked nature. From b6b8196049870aff85ac9178304279733f53403a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 17:00:41 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 06/13] fix "an once" --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md index 2d2ea34..198988e 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Then there was the other matter to consider—the age of his fiancée. Serio She was only seven years old, after all. Just a kid. What if she didn’t understand the meaning of this melodramatic farce? Could she be thinking they were playing a game of hide-and-seek? -If that was the case, then the situation suddenly became troublesome. Perhaps in order to heighten the illusion of having stumbled into an once-in-a-lifetime experience, he hadn’t been informed of his partner’s appearance. +If that was the case, then the situation suddenly became troublesome. Perhaps in order to heighten the illusion of having stumbled into a once-in-a-lifetime experience, he hadn’t been informed of his partner’s appearance. Maybe I should check the other places again? From 504062a4c097f8da2d2b0ace5dd4c27425a2c127 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 9 Oct 2025 17:05:26 +0300 Subject: [PATCH 07/13] in the meanwhile -> in the meantime --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md index 198988e..b47fae8 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/1.md @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ If that was the case, then the situation suddenly became troublesome. Perhaps in Thinking about it, it made sense. On one hand, a boy who’d already submitted to the bothersome world of adults; on the other, a girl three years younger. Their views on the situation would naturally not be the same. Of course the girl, forced to marry an unknown man, would be wary about her soon-to-be partner. -And of course she would try to delay their fateful encounter as long as possible, in the meanwhile trying to observe her partner, even if only a little, to get a better idea of him. +And of course she would try to delay their fateful encounter as long as possible, in the meantime trying to observe her partner, even if only a little, to get a better idea of him. The girl let out a soft scream, turned on her heels, and made to flee…but instead stepped on the hem of her long, expensive-looking dress and came crashing down magnificently. The dress, heavily decorated with light-blue lace, was instantly stained with dirt. From 7d21ceab658fa86d1965bd2378893e8ed6e41d9d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 21 Oct 2025 20:35:14 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/13] Remove newline --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md | 4 +--- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md index 44a7c02..c6bc2db 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md @@ -126,9 +126,7 @@ The Winged Guard was founded under that principle, and uphold it to this day. Feodor winced. That’s one crime exposed. -“If you do sneak out and buy something, you should get something forbidden like alcohol. - -That way you’d gain prestige even if it was found out, right?” +“If you do sneak out and buy something, you should get something forbidden like alcohol. That way you’d gain prestige even if it was found out, right?” No, wait a minute, what’s he going on about now? From 8c0c624089d0f1fab0ac54ae5671756fa397ccb4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 21 Oct 2025 21:16:19 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/13] remove "the" in "the island no 11" --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md index c6bc2db..e53e54a 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.2.md @@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ Just then, Private First Class Talmareet’s angry shouts could be heard from th “…What?” -“These first-class equivalent soldiers will be stationed here. As far as peacetime training and duties are concerned, treat them the same as any other soldier. They’ve passed the basic training curriculum on the Island No. 11, so you won’t need to worry about their ability at that level.” +“These first-class equivalent soldiers will be stationed here. As far as peacetime training and duties are concerned, treat them the same as any other soldier. They’ve passed the basic training curriculum on Island No. 11, so you won’t need to worry about their ability at that level.” The cherry blossom-haired girl added a cheerful “Yep, yep!” in agreement. From cc19554dd8d5435b5255155b2c075602e9fa42ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Formatting@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2025 19:12:09 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 10/13] Ignore .out files --- .gitignore | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/.gitignore b/.gitignore index 41cb247..98f553c 100644 --- a/.gitignore +++ b/.gitignore @@ -8,6 +8,7 @@ WorkDir/ *.pyc *.aux +*.out *.pdf *.synctex.* *.page-numbers.txt From 0075e5ef6d7f43473a07def463968a3c7b7f4a22 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Formatting@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2025 19:18:57 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 11/13] Confirmed in raws that it's "gremians" --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md index 63ae82f..93a4351 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Fortunately, his favorite bakery was still open. Although there were fewer items He popped a donut into his mouth and, chewing on it, set off with the city’s distinct scent of rusted metal filling his nostrils. -This place was once one of the largest mines of Regule Aire. The old mineworkers’ living districts had been wrapped against a steep mountain range, and from there the rest of the city grew almost spontaneously with little rhyme or reason as barracks were erected, roads were paved, and tramline tracks were set in place. Stone as a construction material immediately ran short; metal, much more plentiful, replaced it. Kobolds and gremlins, coming from all over Regule Aire, worked and installed excavation machinery one after another. Pipework and wiring built up over the years, spreading and clumping into unidentifiable masses along the roads and walls. +This place was once one of the largest mines of Regule Aire. The old mineworkers’ living districts had been wrapped against a steep mountain range, and from there the rest of the city grew almost spontaneously with little rhyme or reason as barracks were erected, roads were paved, and tramline tracks were set in place. Stone as a construction material immediately ran short; metal, much more plentiful, replaced it. Kobolds and gremians, coming from all over Regule Aire, worked and installed excavation machinery one after another. Pipework and wiring built up over the years, spreading and clumping into unidentifiable masses along the roads and walls. It was a sight that one wouldn’t see anywhere else in Regule Aire: a city born of metal. From 65417c9e105e2ba23992de3b7ad983a720e5a9a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Formatting@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2025 19:44:11 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 12/13] Remove added gitignore --- .gitignore | 1 - 1 file changed, 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/.gitignore b/.gitignore index 1f94269..13f8736 100644 --- a/.gitignore +++ b/.gitignore @@ -9,7 +9,6 @@ WorkDir/ *.out *.aux -*.out *.pdf *.synctex.* *.page-numbers.txt From 7d67d4f8a76769af91aceba341e1c814c12c127c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: WorldEnd-Admin <168048187+WorldEnd-Admin@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2025 21:55:02 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 13/13] Remove paragraph break when speaker didn't change --- Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md | 4 +--- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md index 93a4351..91b6865 100644 --- a/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md +++ b/Volumes/Volume_01/Text/2.1.md @@ -90,9 +90,7 @@ Right after he’d decided to not get involved, he’d gone and ended up doing e Crap. -“Huh?” She blinked again, now wearing a truly innocent and almost childlike expression. - -“Oh… I think I’m okay? I mean, I’m not so clumsy that I’m going to slip and fall. There’s a container of water down below, anyways, so either way it’s safe.” As she spoke, the girl glanced down from the edge she was sitting on. +“Huh?” She blinked again, now wearing a truly innocent and almost childlike expression. “Oh… I think I’m okay? I mean, I’m not so clumsy that I’m going to slip and fall. There’s a container of water down below, anyways, so either way it’s safe.” As she spoke, the girl glanced down from the edge she was sitting on. Well, that’s probably right. There was a storage tank there, filled with a decent level of water.