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| a convinient REST API, that I utilize in my application via Retrofit library. This way my app always has the latest timetable updates | ||
| while still caching schedules in a local database to display them when there is no internet access. | ||
| Original timetable content lies in the [google spreadsheet](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1wDMuQdYC4ewmW6qSUPFN4VL5_0cxAnI03QcSbIHrla4/edit?usp=sharing). | ||
| To parse it, I wrote a designated [Spring Boot application](https://github.com/Senex-x/itis-timetable-parser) — a convenient REST API that I utilize in this app. This way user always has the latest timetable version |
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wrote -> created / coded
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Spring Boot application — a convenient REST API
Теперь выглядит так, как будто этот сервис это и есть API, что фактически неверно.
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Оставь упоминание ретрофита, лишним не будет
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Я бы не стал использовать словосочетание timetable version, так как оно может ввести в заблуждение, засталяя думать о версии приложения, а не расписания
| while still caching schedules in a local database to display them when there is no internet access. | ||
| Original timetable content lies in the [google spreadsheet](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1wDMuQdYC4ewmW6qSUPFN4VL5_0cxAnI03QcSbIHrla4/edit?usp=sharing). | ||
| To parse it, I wrote a designated [Spring Boot application](https://github.com/Senex-x/itis-timetable-parser) — a convenient REST API that I utilize in this app. This way user always has the latest timetable version | ||
| while still being able to view it offline thanks to the cache in the local database. |
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offline thanks -> offline, thanks
| ## Main screen | ||
| The main screen of the application, that displays daily schedule for the selected group. Horisontal scrolling allows the user | ||
| to view every daily schedule of his timetable. | ||
| Main screen of the application displays daily schedule for the group picked by user. Horizontal scrolling allows to view schedule for each day of the timetable. |
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for the group -> for the study group
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Формулировка
Horizontal scrolling allows to view schedule for each day of the timetable
нечитаема. Надо перфразировать
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