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Senex-x commented Feb 17, 2023

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Senex-x commented Feb 17, 2023

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a convinient REST API, that I utilize in my application via Retrofit library. This way my app always has the latest timetable updates
while still caching schedules in a local database to display them when there is no internet access.
Original timetable content lies in the [google spreadsheet](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1wDMuQdYC4ewmW6qSUPFN4VL5_0cxAnI03QcSbIHrla4/edit?usp=sharing).
To parse it, I wrote a designated [Spring Boot application](https://github.com/Senex-x/itis-timetable-parser) — a convenient REST API that I utilize in this app. This way user always has the latest timetable version
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wrote -> created / coded

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Spring Boot application — a convenient REST API

Теперь выглядит так, как будто этот сервис это и есть API, что фактически неверно.

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Оставь упоминание ретрофита, лишним не будет

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Я бы не стал использовать словосочетание timetable version, так как оно может ввести в заблуждение, засталяя думать о версии приложения, а не расписания

while still caching schedules in a local database to display them when there is no internet access.
Original timetable content lies in the [google spreadsheet](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1wDMuQdYC4ewmW6qSUPFN4VL5_0cxAnI03QcSbIHrla4/edit?usp=sharing).
To parse it, I wrote a designated [Spring Boot application](https://github.com/Senex-x/itis-timetable-parser) — a convenient REST API that I utilize in this app. This way user always has the latest timetable version
while still being able to view it offline thanks to the cache in the local database.
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offline thanks -> offline, thanks

## Main screen
The main screen of the application, that displays daily schedule for the selected group. Horisontal scrolling allows the user
to view every daily schedule of his timetable.
Main screen of the application displays daily schedule for the group picked by user. Horizontal scrolling allows to view schedule for each day of the timetable.
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for the group -> for the study group

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Формулировка

Horizontal scrolling allows to view schedule for each day of the timetable

нечитаема. Надо перфразировать

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ладно

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