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Updated the title and description to reflect multi-currency support and increased language count. Enhanced the content to emphasize Bitcoin-Safe's accessibility and features.
OLD: A desktop software for managing your cold storage wallets.
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| A desktop software for managing your cold storage wallets. | |||
| Private Self-Custody for Sovereign Individuals and Organizations. | |||
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this is too vague. Specific and explanatory is better.
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Instead of what it is, the focus was in what it does (of enable users to do)
| <img src="/images/flows.svg" style=" height: 4em; margin-right: 1em;" alt="Money Flow diagram"> | ||
| <h2 class="h2">Modern</h2> | ||
| <p>Combining powerful tables with modern visualizations for the mempool and money flow diagrams. <a href="{{ "/features/" | relLangURL }}">Fully featured</a> out of the box </p> | ||
| <p>Cold storage doesn't have to feel like 2013. Bitcoin-Safe combines powerful transaction tables with modern visualizations — including mempool insights and money flow diagrams — so you always know what's happening with your bitcoin. <a href="{{ "/features/" | relLangURL }}">Fully featured</a> out of the box, no plugins, no fuss. |
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all the texts are too long. it should be short
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I took the text length from the longest box (Compatible) and adapted the others.
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If we want that people read it, it should be as short as possible.
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If this is true, we should have then only a landing page with one image and a download button? Let's find the balance, made it shorter now. Or even shorter better?
Updated the description for internationalization features to clarify support for local fiat currency and exchange rates.
Corrected punctuation and improved clarity in the description text.
Updated the text to include a link for language support.
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