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Fixed: Passive sentences save one line (64), which I cannot understand well enough.
Long sentences are somewhat fixed, maybe I should look at the check.sh program to modify it so that it recognizes commas and semicolons to not falsely declare long sentences.
Removed some duplicate words as necessary.
Removed all weasel words.

Fixed some grammatical errors.
Rephrased some sentences.

Can you help me get diction working later? Probably an easy fix.

If time permits, I will try to cover some more of the topics, although I am still hounded by Senior Project.

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