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Review Summary

Your implementation of ArrayList is a solid effort and correctly covers the basic functionality. However, several key requirements from the task description need to be addressed before this can be approved.

Here are the main points to fix:

  • Array Manipulation: The task explicitly requires using System.arraycopy() for moving elements. Please replace the manual for loops in your add(T element, int index) and remove(int index) methods with System.arraycopy(). [CHECKLIST ITEM #8]
  • Magic Numbers: The growth factor 1.5 and the default capacity 10 should be declared as private static final constants to improve readability and maintainability. [CHECKLIST ITEM #3]
  • Code Duplication: The index validation logic is repeated in get(), set(), and remove(int). Please extract this into a single private helper method to follow the DRY principle. [CHECKLIST ITEM #5]
  • Variable Naming: The internal array field named array is too abstract. A more descriptive name like elements or elementData should be used. [CHECKLIST ITEM #6]

Please make these changes and resubmit. You're on the right track!


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import java.util.NoSuchElementException;

public class ArrayList<T> implements List<T> {
int DEFAULT_CAPACITY = 10;

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This violates checklist item #3: 'Any magic numbers should be constants'. This field should be declared as a private static final constant to adhere to Java conventions for constants.

int DEFAULT_CAPACITY = 10;
int size = 0;

Object[] array = new Object[DEFAULT_CAPACITY];

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This violates checklist item #6: 'Do not use abstract words like string or array as variable names'. Consider a more descriptive name like elementData or elements.

}

public void grow() {
int newCapacity = (int) (array.length * 1.5);

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This violates checklist item #3: 'Any magic numbers should be constants'. The growth factor 1.5 should be extracted into a named constant to improve readability and maintainability.

Comment on lines 22 to 24
for (int i = 0; i < array.length; i++) {
newCapacityArray[i] = array[i];
}

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This violates checklist item #8: 'Use System.arraycopy() to move your array elements'. This loop should be replaced with a more efficient call to System.arraycopy().

public void add(T value, int index) {

if (index < 0 || index > size) {
throw new ArrayListIndexOutOfBoundsException("Index out of bounds");

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This violates checklist item #10: 'Make your exceptions informative'. This message is not as helpful as it could be. Please include the invalid index and the current size of the list, similar to how you've done in other methods like get().

Comment on lines 36 to 38
for (int i = size - 1; i >= index; i--) {
array[i + 1] = array[i];
}

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This violates checklist item #8: 'Use System.arraycopy() to move your array elements'. Using System.arraycopy() is more efficient for shifting elements than a manual loop.

@Override
public T get(int index) {
return null;
if (index < 0 || index >= size) {

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This violates checklist item #5: 'Don't create repeating code'. The index validation logic is duplicated in get(), set(), and remove(int index). You should extract this into a private helper method to avoid repetition.

Comment on lines 77 to 79
for (int i = index; i < size - 1; i++) {
array[i] = array[i + 1];
}

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This violates checklist item #8: 'Use System.arraycopy() to move your array elements'. A call to System.arraycopy() should be used here to shift the elements after removal.

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Review Summary

Good progress on this task, and thank you for addressing some of the previous feedback. However, changes are needed because several critical requirements from the task description, which were also mentioned in the last review, remain unaddressed. Please focus on these three key points:

  1. Use System.arraycopy(): The task requires you to use System.arraycopy() for all array manipulation. The manual for loops in your add(T, int), remove(int), and grow() methods must be replaced. [CHECKLIST ITEM #8]
  2. Eliminate Magic Numbers: The growth factor 1.5 is still hardcoded. Please declare it as a private static final constant. [CHECKLIST ITEM #3]
  3. Improve Variable Naming: The internal array field named array is too generic. It should be renamed to something more descriptive, like elementData or elements. [CHECKLIST ITEM #6]

You are very close to a complete solution! Please make these adjustments.


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public class ArrayList<T> implements List<T> {
private static final int DEFAULT_CAPACITY = 10;
private int size = 0;
private Object[] array = new Object[DEFAULT_CAPACITY];

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This was mentioned in the previous review. According to checklist item #6, the internal array should have a more descriptive name like elementData or elements instead of the generic array.

Comment on lines 28 to 30
for (int i = size - 1; i >= index; i--) {
array[i + 1] = array[i];
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This was a key point in the previous review. The task requires using System.arraycopy() to shift elements instead of a manual for loop. This violates checklist item #8.

Comment on lines 58 to 60
for (int i = index; i < size - 1; i++) {
array[i] = array[i + 1];
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Similar to the add method, this for loop should be replaced with a call to System.arraycopy() as required by checklist item #8. This was also mentioned in the previous review.

}

private void grow() {
int newCapacity = (int) (array.length * 1.5);

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The growth factor 1.5 is a magic number. Please declare it as a private static final constant, as required by checklist item #3 and mentioned in the previous review.

Comment on lines 95 to 97
for (int i = 0; i < array.length; i++) {
newCapacityArray[i] = array[i];
}

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This loop for copying elements to the new array should also be replaced with System.arraycopy() to adhere to checklist item #8.

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Review Summary

Great job addressing the previous feedback! You've done excellent work implementing System.arraycopy and improving the code's readability. I am approving your solution so you can proceed, but I want to highlight a couple of areas for future improvement.

To make your code even better, consider extracting the capacity check from both add methods into a single private helper method to avoid code duplication [CHECKLIST ITEM #5]. Also, try to make the exception message in your add(T value, int index) method more informative by including the invalid index and the list's size, which is a great practice for debugging [CHECKLIST ITEM #10].

Keep up the fantastic work!


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@Override
public void add(T value) {

if (size == elementData.length) {

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This capacity check is repeated in the add(T value, int index) method (line 25). This violates checklist item #5: 'Don't create repeating code.' Consider moving this logic into a separate private helper method, for example, ensureCapacity(), and calling it from both add methods.

public void add(T value, int index) {

if (index < 0 || index > size) {
throw new ArrayListIndexOutOfBoundsException("Index out of bounds");

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This exception message is not very informative. Checklist item #10 requires informative exception messages. It would be more helpful to include the invalid index and the current size, similar to the message in your checkIndex method.

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